Editing Exercise

Edited by Jessie and Nick.

1.     This is my classroom, and these is  my classmates. My best friend’s name is Andrew. He writes on the blackboard. My other friend Amy is being funny. She is talking and tells jokes to Bradely. They not listening to the teacher. The kid in the front row throwing a paper airplane. The teacher looks at the map, so she don’t see the airplane. He is always misbehave. I standing near the window looking outside. It’s a beautiful day. I am wishing I could go outside right now.

     This is my classroom, and these are  my classmates. My best friend’s name is Andrew. He is writing on the blackboard. My other friend Amy is being funny. She is talking and telling jokes to Bradely. They are not listening to the teacher. The kid in the front row is throwing a paper airplane. The teacher is looking at the map, so she does not see the airplane. He is always misbehaving. I am standing near the window looking outside. It’s a beautiful day. I wish I could go outside right now.

2.     Sarah has a party. All of her friends are inviting. Sarah wearing a new green skirt. Her friends all are looking nice too. They are listen to music and dancing, and talking. Some people are sitting on the couch and watch TV. It’s a fun party! Rachel dances with Peter. They are having a lot in common. They both likes jazz music and horror movies. On the backyard people sitting beside the swimming pool. Suddenly Malika fall into the pool. Everyone laugh…even Malika! Now her clothes is wet. Everybody are having a great time. Nobody want to go home!

  Sarah has a party. All of her friends are invited. Sarah is wearing a new green skirt. Her friends all look nice too. They are listening to music and dancing, and talking. Some people are sitting on the couch and watching TV. It’s a fun party! Rachel dances with Peter. They have a lot in common. They both like jazz music and horror movies. On the backyard people are sitting beside the swimming pool. Suddenly Malika falls into the pool. Everyone is laughing…even Malika! Now her clothes is wet. Everybody has a great time. Nobody wants to go home!